Friday 11 May 2012

Fallen Leaf - A Haiku

A sullen breeze once-
broke but the tree still wants
to see--It's Fallen Leaf 

2 comments:

  1. I am fond of haiku's, they are simple in their complexities and I think you grasped that here. Made me think of summer beaches and littered seas of bobbing surfers' heads.

    Fondly,
    Anna

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  2. That's what I was going for-
    Thanks

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